This projected developed from a trunk full of old wood blinds. In lecture, Bill commented about following the materials and not so much the words. I had one of those "aha!" moments. In other projects I had been trying to make the materials fit my purpose, which was not so successful. This time I worked with what the materials could do and what a difference! It all came together with less frustration and I actually liked the result.
From the critique, what was good about it:
- The color and shine of the balloons was an attention grabber
- The movement of the balloons added a bit of drama
- The balloon inside merged the two contrasting elements of the the shiny color with the flat color
- Delicate, light, and airy
- Geometric and squishy shapes
- Evenly spaced balloons good
- Looks like it was made by a female
Improvements:
- Remove weight from balloons and use only fishing line
- Bar code was a distraction
- A section of the box was not aligned correctly
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